Page c panel 1 - another suspensful bit where were not sure if Firelord is still under hypnosis or what - note the expression on the girl's face - pretty worried but still defiant -
panel 2 - fire is exagerated for dramatic effect - jewel hidden fromview for suspense...
panel 3 - good body language on girl - hair, flame and hand all intertwine to focus attention on jewel, Firelord neutral body language for suspense...
panel 4 - enlarged, tensed hand perfectly illustrates girl's desperate action and domineering character, links Firelord's face( expression is neutral yet somewhat willful) with his hand (that's holding the jewel).
Page c panel 5 - close-up of fist - climax - as the latina girl's plans definitively crumble, dig the almost symbolic focus as the source of her powers and plans are crushed.
panel6 - essentially the same as panel 1 - except expressions and composition show a reversed balance of power - this is the fourthclose-up of her face over 3 pages and one can see a progression of her expression from defiant to defeated
panel 7 - quick-cut transition - great dynamic shot - creates a new tense situation...
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Page 33 of that strip I'm doing, fresh off the griddle... introducing Wulfgar the Dane and another character known only as 'The Masked Knight'...
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